two reds, in black and white; more collage fragments…
fragments #53, painted paper and card collage on watercolour card, 38mm x 43mm
fragments #06, painted paper and card collage on black card, 45mm x 45mm
a barn, a door, one red
or a cottage blushing pink
old shacks, one shed
shapes into things, i think…
red [read]
pink [rosy]
shacks [live]
shed [discard]
shapes [assumes]
things [unspecified]
sunday nonsense…
pictures like kind
will please mind
here say
there beauty
monday morning [part one]…
here, and there i went
as a shadow, indifferent
what i felt, i would not say
words falter, and so delay
here: present, listening, place
there: focus, attention, existence
shadow: slight, trace, obscure
indifferent: cool, impassive, remote
falter: fail, fall, pause
delay: slow, still, waiting
monday morning [part two]…
while unseen, stating
one place, to drown
deep thought, abating
one tug, cast down
gone fishing… [for a metaphor]
found this: philosophical honey http://www.theschooloflife.com/shop/philosophical-honey/
time for tea: not sure about word “stating”, might change to [thinks]..?
tug = a boat + other plays on words – amend ‘to stay’ and ‘cast away’, changes everything.
alt. version:
while unseen, in _______
one place, here to stay
deep thoughts, abating
one tug, and cast away
alt. alt. version:
a barn, a door, one red
a cottage, blushing rosy
old shacks, one shed
shaping things, apoesy
here, and there i went
as a shadow, indifferent
what i felt, i would not say
words falter, and so delay
while unseen, hereabout
one place, run-down
…
…
[stuck!!]
wonky-rhyming couplets have run amok… i’ll no more be a poet than be an artist.