two reds

Saturday 1 November 2014

two reds, in black and white; more collage fragments…

fragments collage 53

fragments #53, painted paper and card collage on watercolour card, 38mm x 43mm

fragments collage 06

fragments #06, painted paper and card collage on black card, 45mm x 45mm

a barn, a door, one red

or a cottage blushing pink

old shacks, one shed

shapes into things, i think…

9 thoughts on... two reds

  1. Jazz

    monday morning [part one]…

    here, and there i went
    as a shadow, indifferent
    what i felt, i would not say
    words falter, and so delay

  2. Jazz

    here: present, listening, place
    there: focus, attention, existence
    shadow: slight, trace, obscure
    indifferent: cool, impassive, remote
    falter: fail, fall, pause
    delay: slow, still, waiting

  3. Jazz

    time for tea: not sure about word “stating”, might change to [thinks]..?

    tug = a boat + other plays on words – amend ‘to stay’ and ‘cast away’, changes everything.

    alt. version:

    while unseen, in _______
    one place, here to stay
    deep thoughts, abating
    one tug, and cast away

  4. Jazz

    alt. alt. version:

    a barn, a door, one red
    a cottage, blushing rosy
    old shacks, one shed
    shaping things, apoesy

    here, and there i went
    as a shadow, indifferent
    what i felt, i would not say
    words falter, and so delay

    while unseen, hereabout
    one place, run-down

    [stuck!!]

    wonky-rhyming couplets have run amok… i’ll no more be a poet than be an artist.

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